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[fatmanterror]

hey here is the ussj trunks model again, i fixed a few things from the last pic, like he is buffer and at first the hair wasnt made of cylinders because im a dumbass and wanted to lower the polycount but now they r cylinders, but aside from that many say it doesnt look like him, so give me some suggestions, be as a$$hole-ish as u want, i need the ideas

USSJ TRUNKS

ps in one of those pics the hand is messed up cause i took the shot during an animation

 

[fatmanterror]

come on people

 

[koblano]

The hair is WAY too pointy. Make it kinda more like trunks hair...

 

[BrunO]

Sorry to say but that model is just Plain Nasty!!! His hair dont look like trunks' at all but you need some more practice.
I couldnt do any better but screw it, I dont like it at all!

BrunO

 

[|DbZ| Android16]

i have a suggestion... leave modelling to the good people....

 

[)e(Bishop]

16 Tell me about your skinning and modeling skills, I don't think you have any, do you? Always complaining about others work. If you don't have anything usefull to say just shut up.....

 

[|DbZ| Android16]

dude, i was in bad mood, sorry, it is pretty cool, just needs to be less pointy... and yes i do have modelling and skinning skills... sorry...

 

[fatmanterror]

nah 16's just puttin in his opinion, but 16, this is the first model that ive ever messed with as far as editing, so be cool im sure ur first edit wasnt that great, everybody else thank u for suggestions, actually only 1 of u had a suggestion, things like "it sucks" dont help me out

 

[fatmanterror]

oh yeah, the pic of the front shot was at a slightly low angle so it made the front of the hair seem longer, id post a good shot of the front so u can see how the hair matches but i doubt that would change anyones mind on it, by the way, wasnt trunks's hair long and point when he went USSJ? i didnt have a pic to reference it by so i tried it by memory only.

 

[|DbZ| Android16]

i have a suggestion, dont make all of the hair point up, make some of it curl, or point to the side... well, is it animated and ready for ESF? because if it isnt, ill animate it for ya...

 

[fatmanterror]

thank u, now that is criticism i can use, and yes its animated but thanks for the offer

 

[fatmanterror]

ok, if u r wondering why i made the hair rigid click on the link again, u will see a reference pic of ussj trunks and u can see for urself he has pointy rigid hair, at least the version of trunks the model is based on does

 

[|DbZ| Android16]

can you send me the model so i can fix it up?

 

[|DbZ| Android16]

CAN I HAVE THEM PLEASE!

 

[fatmanterror]

yeah sure email me at [email protected] and make the subject USSJ and ill send it to u, if i dont for some reason they will be in the ssj script so u can get them off of that for sure

 

[Hibiki]

he dosnt look buff enough to be ussj... and the hair dosnt look right...

 

[fatmanterror]

r the strands too skinny, too long, out of place? i need details

 

[Hibiki]

all of what u just said... too skiny.. a bit to long and not in the right spot...

 

[fatmanterror]

alright hibiki, i wish u would use constructive criticsm more often, thats how things get done

 

[fatmanterror]

alright everybody, i did alot of work on the hair as requested, i made it a little shorter, less pointy and the strands are fatter and in the right place now, ill have a pic sometime soon when i feel like puttin them up on my website