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hey here is my ssj3 goku, the skin is only a temp, my friend is gonna try to skin it, if it turns out well ill show the finished product when its done, here ya go everybody, i know it looks a lil screwy but remember, to make a really good ssj3, it would take waaaaaaaaaaaayyyyy to many polies in the hair, unless ur a really good modeler, which i am not, and i use milkshape, so i have kinda limited options on how to make the hair
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well..... i dont know much bout al lthis stuff but that model is weird too un pro[portioned or whatever arms too big and the hair is prety bad. Sorry dude....
 
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well the arms look too long because the camera angle, i made it closer to the head so people could see it better
 
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he looks like the hunch back of notre dame's bro or something.. hehe sorry he look hunched over
 
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I don't mean to offend, since I could not make anything better. But I think it looks pretty terrible.

Just over all try and make things look better. Especially the hair.
 
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alot of people on these forums are jerks, saying it just looks terrible doesnt help me make it better, if u dont have something to say that will help me make it better, why would u say anything at all?
 
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Considering your level of experience, i think youre doing an excellent job, however, 1 recommendation i would make, is go to a site that has some GOOD referance pictures for DBZ characters, so you can get your proportions correct, and perhaps a lil study in basic anatomy wouldnt hurt either

All in all, youre doin well, keep it up ;)

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thanks cheeseman, see this is the kinda thing that helps me get better
 
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Its not bad, Especially since your pretty new to this but I'd like to point something out :) Make him a bit taller, he looks like a Leprachaun with a belly [Don't take this offensivly, I couldn't do any better :)]

Maybe make him a bit taller and his hair with less spikes.
 
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hmm alright, thanks for the info spifire, btw i want people to know i actually listen and improve on points people tell me so if u notice something that hasnt been pointed out tell me
 
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i think its good but there are several things that need work.. for one the hair isnt long enough and ssj3 gokus hair comes down to a point like \/ at the end and it aslo goes down to his ass


also the front of the hair needs to be redone and the head could use some reshapeing but other than that its good
 
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ive redone alot on the hair due to the suggestions of all u happy people, tomorrow, ill work on the front part of his hair, u can see the updated pics at the ssj3color link at the top of the page
 
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DEWD, whatever feedback you get, DONT lose the faith.

Its easy to quit, why do you think so many ppl do ?

Stick with it and achieve what you set out to do, the only person that needs to get satisfaction from your efforts is YOU

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A+ for effort, not bad for a first swing.. although he looks like he's got sideburns. prolly just the angle, good job for a ssj3 goku tho. that'd prolly be one of the hardest characters to model. :yes:
 
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Originally posted by Cheeseman
DEWD, whatever feedback you get, DONT lose the faith.

Its easy to quit, why do you think so many ppl do ?

Stick with it and achieve what you set out to do, the only person that needs to get satisfaction from your efforts is YOU

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the model looks like his legs are stubby from the front. i think the skin is a little blurred. the hair is alright but doesn't really resemble the anime version. don't worry your a lot better than i am at any type of modeling. you got SKILLZ in my book.
 
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No problem man and I must admit, I am liking your stuff now :) Keep this up! So, Who are you planning to do for your next model :D
 
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I like that model. The first attempt I made at a model of a person from scratch was a sphere with 5 cones coming out of it, and a rectangular-esk shape for the main body (i think...)

I would listen to Cheese, take a look at some clear pics of SSJ3 Goku to check proportions, and see if u can get a clear glance at the hair from all 4 angles, that should help to shape it perfectly.

For new modeling I give it my personal :yes:
 
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thanks for all ur comments people, yeah making ssj3 goku and keeping it under 1300 polygons is almost impossible, but what u see is the best I could do right now, i tried a bunch of other ways, but non of them looked right at all, i think i picked a character thats a little too advanced for my right now, and spitfire, i dunno what im gonna do next, what do u wanna see done?
 
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If you wanna try another character from DBZ that ISNT done all the time, why not consider a Master Roshi?

Just a thought ;)
 
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or a midget krillin from dragon ball

or even better a nimbus cloud!!
 

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