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well here is my first DBZ Artwork ever !! let me know what you all think. P.S its not finished yet ill have the complete one up soon

 
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The first one looks like a demented wolf.
The second one is pretty good, only he looks a bit mucked up some how.

P.S: when u take a pic with a digital camera. try and fit the whole page in.
 
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the 2nd one is nice, but the face could use some work.
 
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The second one is quite good except his eyes look messed just fix thatO_O
 
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The face looks good but the body is a lil skew (tjek the shoulders)
 
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drawings look great man. MUCH better than i could do (=/). keep it up man.
 
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Hey Goku, its Nub. We played and u told me to check ur art out, well i found it but isnt impressed. i did better ^.^

anyways its pretty good but something is wrong with them.... i think its the eyes
 
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very nic my firend keep up the good work and remember PRACCY MAKES PERFECT! :D
 
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well, srry, they r verry sloby, looks like made on comp, with a crappy mouse....
since these r ur first 3, there nice enough.
but the only thing i like is the goku hair on the second one.
 
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The proportions are done wrong.... the heads dont look right
the lines look choppy too... make it a little smoother... and it should be ok...
but still, the proportions are going to be wrong o_O
 
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Yeah, a lot of the lines aren't straight, or smooth as they should be. You also need to work on proportions. Not bad work at all for a beginner; keep it up and I'm sure you'll be good!
 
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thanks for all the critz i will improve as i have more practice and thanks for the help i will post some more art later on in the week or day maybe even some of my screenies from my goku model
P.S. i'd like to see some of talls drawings aswell
 
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OOOOOOHHHHHHHH MY GOD HELP ME oh those are some scary drawings how did you post them?
 
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why the f*ck do you only flame @ people! i just hate those people!! grr, please, just act normal, hes just a beginner!
 
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Well here is a background i made. And wangster is right back off a little im new at drawing anime style
 

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