[SPOILER] Holow Ichigo Powerup .v. 2

[Arsenovicius]

Oh well i heard very nice critic from my first attempt with that aura
Lets see...
It has empty space..yeah
and probably you may thing bad lighting too..
also render is bad cutted..But i think i love it already :yes:

see it your self ^^

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/Arsenovicius/holowichigopowerupv2.jpg

 

[-Origin]

I have no idea what it's supposed to look like, but I like it. The stock is propely immersed in the brushing, but it seems there's a bit straight edges on the aura itself which seem kind of out of place... But I don't know anything about the character or anything so.. don't mind me.

 

[Arsenovicius]

Any more thoughts ?

 

[Ice-X]

send it to me ill show you some tips...got some nice ideas could be great