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I'm not really sure if i'm being smart submitting this here. Because probably not enough people will even see this.
It's also been a long time since i last posted. But i do still visit these forums occasionally.
But a while back and maybe some people remember, i showed the first version of this manga in this same forum.
I redrew everything and changed the story a little bit. But being just 5 pages you can't really call it a story yet.
Hope somebody is interested and can give me some good crits on the drawings because i like some of them, but mostly i need to find consistency in the quality of the drawings and how the characters look.
Anyway here they come:
page 1:
page 2:
page 3:
page 4:
page 5:
That's all folks.
It's also been a long time since i last posted. But i do still visit these forums occasionally.
But a while back and maybe some people remember, i showed the first version of this manga in this same forum.
I redrew everything and changed the story a little bit. But being just 5 pages you can't really call it a story yet.
Hope somebody is interested and can give me some good crits on the drawings because i like some of them, but mostly i need to find consistency in the quality of the drawings and how the characters look.
Anyway here they come:
page 1:
page 2:
page 3:
page 4:
page 5:
That's all folks.