The render used in my current one is from the game That's probably what's throwing it off. I might go on a bit of an edit spree later tonight.I prefer this one a lot more than the one you're using currently, something about the render in the current one doesn't gel as well, however, I think you should have applied a few more effects to the background of the new one, like in your current one ^^
I love ya work man, love it.