skribbled luv eh?

[Skiwan]

well, yesterday, i went to see mangaminx again, and as usual was nerve racking all day >_<, im a shy guy heh. Anyways i was on the train home, with nothing to do, listening to music, with her on my mind, i found a lil 3 inch pencil, so i got the peice of paper with my train times in my pocket and decided to draw, its crappeh, but yeah, its ment to get across a feeling.... heh here u go:

 

[zeldalink]

still looks good to me , the crumbled up paper gives it more realism to the scribble idea

 

[Judge]

I like it man, and what Zeldalink said is very true. it does add something to the picture.

good job on the drawing.

 

[Soulicro]

If thats bad, I dont know whats good man. That picture is very nice... really deep too; I bet plently of people can relate to it, including me.

 

[Skiwan]

thanks guys, i appreciate the coments :]

i was requested to do another one by certain sum1 >_< so i have, its hard doing love scenes for sum reason if they were fightin i'd find it a lot easier, im not sure wats up with this pic, i spent a long time on it, i dunno i cant draw girls >_<, plus i know whats up with the head proportions but i didnt realise till it was too late anyway, this is another moment i tried to capture..... anyway

 

[Scorcher2k]

What do you mean you can't draw girls? She looks hot and it deffinantly conveys the message.

 

[MANGAMINX]

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh tee hee uve made me look real pretty hun thankies :laff:
i though i kissed u on the lips , then cheek oh well its really movin tha u drew something the looks sooo real to wot happened .......and hey i dun mind if u put my pic i drew 4u on here hun :laff:
^_^ thankies again dave

 

[Alteh]

Very nice drawings, gives it a nice comic feel to it.

 

[MrDomino]

Ah spring, when a young man's fancy turns to love.

I like the crumpled paper, I also like both compositions. There are some bizarre anatomy things that, if fixed, will add a lot more to similar drawings in the future. Check out saveloomis.org for some good reference. May I also suggest one of two things: either use a piece of tracing paper as a smudge guard under your hand when you draw, or use an artgum or kneaded eraser to constanty clean smudges as they happen.

You've got a good range of values in your pencil work, maybe think about taking it further by adding more pure blacks or pure whites. You may also consider experimenting with line weight and thickness.

Good work though, keep with it. Have you considered color? I find I always think in vibrant color when I think of that special someone.

 

[Marauder]

both very nice pics, the first one is graet, can see it took u a small amount of time but it still looks nice
the 2nd one is great aswell..i love the gal on it
good work

 

[Skiwan]

thanks for the advice mr.domino i shall do ^_^

and the gal on its mine

 

[MANGAMINX]

hehehehehehehe yupi all urs ^_^hunni

 

[Cold Steel]

If i could draw women like that, I would draw them all day long.

Lookin good there david.

 

[Marauder]

If i could draw women like that, I would draw them all day long.

Lookin good there david.

u sure you would draw em oh buddy ? ^^