PiXel said:
as also your hair looks like it got eaten by pacman.
lol...
@Almighty_Gir
From the from I think her hair needs to bow out a bit more because it looks like she has no ears. I think her skin needs a little more yellow and brown in it- It looks like she applied a bit too much makeup to her cheeks, so tone that down a bit too. Also, to make the jacket she is wearing appear more 3D against her body, you should shade around where the jacket just ends (shade the skin underneath the cloth, but becoems visible as the cloth ends)
Her Belly button seems a bit low, throwing her off proportionately (sp?) you need to make the cleavage (sp?) area much darker cause her boobs seems... well.. 2D.
I don't know why you shaded into her belly button area (refering to where to started shading too early in the middle of the stomach and continued to her belly button), it doesn't make too much sense like that. Sorry I can't do a drawover of what I mean- I mean, unless you want an ms paint, mouse job, I guess Ill wait till I return home. HOpe it helps