Shikamaru [WIP]

[JTR]

I tweaked my Shikamaru a LOT!

Front Smooth
Old:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Shikamaru-Front-Smooth-6.jpg
New:

Side Smooth
Old:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Shikamaru-Side-Smooth-6.jpg
New:

Front/Side Flat/Wireframe
Old:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Shikamaru-SideFront-Flat-6.jpg
New:

I edited the to the official Character Sheet. And thanks to Element for letting me edit his 4th Hokage face into my Shikamaru. Lots of other tweak. Look between the pictures. Still a lot needs to be done but that'll be tommorrow. And I know he looks fat so don't crit that... And a drawover for polyflow on the hair would really be appreciated(sp?)

- JTR

EDIT:
Oh.. Almost forgot to show. My best model ever.. Rulez them all..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Kunai-Smooth.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Kunai-Flat.jpg
Nice, isn't it??

 

[Enix]

Give me some character sheets XD.

, anyway, looks ok, but since when did shika have curves? Lots of wasted polys
on the face, and everywhere else. And make ur own head . That way if it looks
bad you cant say "oh, well it was his fault!!". Gimme some character sheets ^_^.

 

[-Origin]

He looks a bit chibi, a bit too much like a kid if you ask me. o_o

 

[SwordMaster]

I must agree with "X" on that one. Looks like a kid.

 

[JTR]

Oooookay.. UPDATE:

And perspectiv with and without Jacket...

Lots of changes.. I've deleted the old pics both at my HD and Photobucket :s

Critz and Comments welcome...

- JTR

 

[-Origin]

he still looks too young....i think it's the size of the head along with some wrong proportions or something?

 

[Growler]

he looks boring, but idk naruto, so maybe thats how it is

 

[Enix]

OH NOES! ITS TEH HUNCH BACK OF TEH SHIKAMARU:O!!

.

Got some crits:

- Legs are too short, and from what i see he has no ass.
- The shoes have a wierd shape, and are a little flat :\.
- The flow is really wierd, especially in the face.
- Turn off the 50% self illumination so we can see the mesh properly.
- Lots of wasted polys in the hair.
- Give it some shapem its practically shapless.

It needs alot od work, but ur gettin there , I see some improvments since ur last model .

 

[niobe]

he neads laisy eyes, that's what he is anyway

 

[JTR]

"X" @
I don't think he looks tooooo young.. Remember he's still only 12 years old..

Dan16 @
Shikamaru is booring person... All he want to do is looking at clouds...
But he has a mad IQ over 200 :O And by that a GREAT strategist...
Watch Naruto.. It's worth it

Enix @
Ill look at those critz.. Thanks...
But I don't think the legs is too short...
The ref is used:

Just think the might need to get a bit wider from the side??

niobe @
That's a skinning problem.. But I think Ill try doing them a bit lazyer when I remodel the head..

Forgot some1??
But what Im going to do is following Enix critz and maybe try to make him a bit older.. And remodel the head.. I need some practice at that area (And all the others )...

Thanks for critz.. Keep them comming..

- JTR

 

[broli]

Proportion wise this needs some work though. The actual leg part is way to fat, you should make that thinner. Also make the hips a lil less round and move them up a lil, and then make the arm longer by making the lower arm longer, and the upper arm slighty sticking out of the sleeves, make the legs slightly longer with the torso. You should also make the head smaller. From the side pull back the chest with the stomach cause they'er seriously sticking out way to much while it should form a nice flow till the neck. Same as the back and the front crotch, pull them both inwards. Here's a paintover (do mind I'm no expert in ps, it's just to make my arguments clear.)

 

[JTR]

Tryed following the drawover:

I think he looked better before?? I made the head smaller.. Tweaked sandals.. another row of polies in the torso... Leg tweaked/made longer... And some other minor tweaks..

- JTR