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this is a quicky, without any shading, im not gonna talk much cue i have to run now

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the head or neck are disproportionate, but other wise it seems pretty good-other than the fact that she doesnt look too sensative :p
 
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damn guy, i like

her head is off size, and her left arm looks a bit funky, but it's really nice guy
 
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ooh, very nice once again bolteh.

And her head does look a little less huge. great job! :)
 
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nicely done... the arm still looks a lil funky right around the right wrist, but i'd say that's just your style
 
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head is still a lil bit huge. I bet if you finished her hands it would look bettah! :yes:
 
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very nice m8, awesome drawing. but yeah there is something wrong with the head etc. she has a pretty big jawline. but very nicely done no doubt. keep it up :)
 
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O_O nice man keep up the good work (and the proportions are just right :))
 

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/me kicks judge :p

anyway, i updated it a bit with less fatter look of the lines and a shorter jaw :X

 
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Your drawings are a little weird. You have a talent, yes. But when I go at sketching, I usually start with the face then move down. The arms are about the only things that need work. She's still kinda boney in that area.The hands seem a bit long..Other than that it's a nice piece :smile:
 
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Nice work, S-Bolt--! I love the way you draw these girls man, just one thing though. She doesn't look so sensitive to me. :laff:
 

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Your drawings are a little weird. You have a talent, yes. But when I go at sketching, I usually start with the face then move down. The arms are about the only things that need work. She's still kinda boney in that area.The hands seem a bit long..Other than that it's a nice piece :smile:
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ehm, if you sart with the face and move down, than ur the guy whos doing it wrong...

what made you think i start with the face?
my way of working:
- draw a few ideasketches (quick posing)
- after picking out my best ideasketch i start at real size, i sketch the stickfigure (with the pose) add basic shapes as flesh reference
- i add detail to the flash till i get final result like i want it
- scan it and ink it in illustrator
- fix some detail probs in illustrator

if u start drawing the final form without doing these steps, than ur the guy with the wrong sketchingstyle, no offence


but, i do agree with the hands :p ill change them in my next update, thx ;)
 
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That looks damn good bolt, the only thing I think looks a little funky is the lips, they look kinda like attached worms :\
Also, around where her hands bend around her body, the fingers dont look quite right, thats it.
I'd say very good draw man, its kickass
 

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