Sasuke [WIP]

[JTR]

Just started Sasuke... 1½ hour work atm:

Head is from an old Sasuke (black clothes)... Just need to edit the hair shorter..
And then Ill try making some new hands.. I need to improve The custom ones I have atm..

C&C thanks... cya..

- JTR

PS. I could still need some critz on my Zabuza:
http://forum.esforces.com/showthread.php?t=53956

EDIT:
Now when I look at it the legs look kinda small and thin..
But it fits both of the refs I got... What do you think??

 

[bldskakarot]

i think he needs muscles...

 

[Ravendust]

Ref!

The eyes look weird, too far apart, bring them in a bit and maybe make them bigger.

 

[DJ-Ready]

he looks a bit fat in the front view to me.
looks like a good start though

 

[broli]

Hello, well I made a paint over but I'm to lazy to explain what I did but it's mainly making the upper body thinner and more thinage on the reast, and making the legs a lil fatter...

 

[Jimyn]

all i have to say is nice start. you have enough advise for the next lot of screenys so i will advised when you post them

 

[JTR]

UPDATE:

Flat/1 Color:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Models/2-Sasuke1-Flat1Color-Front.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Models/2-Sasuke1-Flat1Color-Side.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Models/2-Sasuke1-Flat1Color-Per.jpg
Wireframe:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Models/2-Sasuke1-Wireframe-All.png

*Redid front Hair
*Followed broli's drawover
*minor tweaks (elbows and stuff)

Polycount is quite high... Ill lower it later..
Made lots pictures this time.. so give me some critz

C&C plz.. Thanks..

@ broli
Thanks again

- JTR

 

[g0jack]

I think the neck should be a tad wider...

Also, the neck part of the shirt shouldn't be symmetrical

 

[xtox_nItRo]

looks nice keep it up

 

[Ravendust]

1. Make the head a bit wider and have the hair cover the sides of the face by making it more bushy.
2. Slightly lengthen the neck.
3. The collar is too big and rigid.
4. Have the fringe go up before coming down as curtains, instead of hanging down over the forehead protector.
5. Sweep the top of the hair to the right rather than straight up.
6. Have the back of the hair come down to his neck so you can see it from the front.
7. Make the chin more pointy and the face more angular.

Hope that helps

 

[JTR]

UPDATE:

*Added Hands
*Tweaked it all over

@ Ravendust
Thanks.. Ill use it some time later when I tweak the face...

- JTR

 

[Cruzharo]

mhh nice... i like it mayby just get it a bit more in proportion though.

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

Whoa those fingers are long? Are they meant to be like that?

 

[Almighty_Gir]

actually the fingers look about the right length, but the finges and hands are both way too thin...

 

[JTR]

Ups.. Forgot to post this update because of there was no replys from my last post..

Ill reposition the fingers a bit.. And make them fatter..

 

[broli]

MUCH better, really...only thing I forgot to mention was the chest sticking out to much from the side...other then that it looks good

 

[g0jack]

I dunno, his hands look funny

 

[JTR]

UPDATE:

A bit of adding/fixing...

- JTR

 

[Mr. Phonso]

sweet, im guessing that the hair wont look symetrical when done

 

[eyesore]

why do his toes look like little cubes?