Sakura wip

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here is my wip, its nearly done and i have someone who wants to uv her and another who wants to skin

big thx to elemental for the help and model sujestions

 
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waw sexy...lol. I think u should fix the face a little.
 
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-longer fingers
-shoulders shorter in respect to the height
-neck shorter
-raised wasist + shorts up
-scaled hamstring a little bigger
-changed the eye colour (makes the face look better)

better?

 
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Very slick, DarkSniper! Man I wish I could actually model something more significant then a form of money from a game. I've got win 98, Ms3d and no skill at all. If someone only had an easy tutorial for Ms3d, then I might be better... Oops! Got off topic there for a moment. Please don't bother with me. *gets back on topic* This model is going to be even better once it's completed. Hope to see some more updates! Good job, and good luck, man!
 
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nice stuff, face looks really weird to me, eyes..nose...mouth, can you show front and side please?
 
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Uhm like i told ya on msn is quite nice... but ya shouldfix the pointyness of the face..
 
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I think her forehead is too long...
but it would help to see the frontwiew..
 
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You know she does has a big forehead =P

basically what SV said are my critz, its lookin good atm =)
 
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DarkSniper said:
-longer fingers
-shoulders shorter in respect to the height
-neck shorter
-raised wasist + shorts up
-scaled hamstring a little bigger
-changed the eye colour (makes the face look better)
well I agree with this, but still he forgot one important little thing
she doesn't have a behind, which is very important for overal look!
 
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I think her forehead is too long...
but it would help to see the frontwiew..
She's called big forehead girl in the show, i actually think the forehead is too small hehe.

The hands seem pretty small aswell, might wanna scale them up a bit.
 
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yeah...forehead is good, however like evryone says the face looks a bit weird (the mouth...and her chin looks too male-ish) and her waist (stumach...whatever) looks too fat, she isnt that fat
 
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I don't know how she looks in the show cause i've never seen it but the eyes look like they are too far apart.. maybe thats just what it looks like at an angle..otherwise it looks pretty good to me.
 
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First of all, she does need a nice curvy arse, and a thinner waist, (but make sure the hips still curved) and another thing that u should really remember as a rule for almost every human/anime character is that the brow is always further forward, all the features of the face are more sloped backwards towards the neck/spine... if u want me to do a drawover for the model pm me a side and front view. Im sorry i never did with ur bruce model >_< i didnt do to well doing the drawover and never got round to finishing it, and it looked rather good how it was =P. I was thinking of doing some sakura art... i might do sometime soon D:
 
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my sources say otherwise



tis from the manga...
 
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Yep , This is the new Super Strong 16 year old Sakura.So far DS goodjob alot of proportions need editing but i know you can do it esp with the help of david and i cant wait to skin this girl :p
 
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i think ehr boots might be alil too lose...should b more curved to her leg...

the erm...uhh...hmm her knees look alil bowl legged
but overall great job dark :)
 
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....i did my best
 
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alright thx, elemental wants to give a go at tweaking my model
 

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