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hey guys... need crits to improve my vegeta model... please post what ever help I can use! ^_^

here is the 3D views of the body

here is the hair I've only finished up to the front of the hair.. starting on the back soon.. and on the render the ref pic I used for vegeta's hair
 
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Its good so far but the mid is kinda big to me it might just be that im tired though.
 
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That is looking very good so far.
At this point I cant see anything wrong with it.
Great Job
 

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the head where the bald is the left side of it is not right compared to the right side
 
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Hmmm he looks

FAT...i think todoria has a thinner ass!
he has no mucels(is that how u right it?)

hands should have more mucels as well as his lags...he should have thinner waist i think you could do much better.

nice model any way
 
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he looks a little wide, but otherwise it's perfect
 
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yea id say make him a tad bit skinner and he should look great....looks great so far :D
 
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looken good

a few things tho

1 -needs muscles
2 -the armor needs 2 be relooked over
3 -the crotch/butt part is 2 long
 
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thanks for the crits.. I'll pass them on to the editor so he can make the apropriate changes.. thanks alot
 

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