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This was a compilation piece, a HUGE thanks to Hwoarang for the poem. ^^

Don't mind the quality, it represents the deteriation of one's soul as life goes on. And even though people reflect a certain image on the outside, it's the image on their soul that counts.

<i>Rubber Soul, where do I begin?
Rubber Soul, your price made me think you were going to be there till the end
Rubber Soul, what is it your goal to pretend?
That eventually I wasn't going to tear you away in the end?
My heart has lost it's touch, it's broken in disgust of thinking you were a friend

Rubber Soul, you did keep my feet snug, warm, and comfortable
Rubber Soul, for what it was... I consider your effort enough and even fortunely honorable
Rubber Soul, I remember when I bought you fresh.... that rubber soul smell... so lovable
Writing this poem I realize my selfish tendencies
You did print that infamous nike check into the ass of my enemies

Rubber Soul, my love for you has gone out of control unhesitantly
Rubber Soul, I have to hold back... in fear I'll lose you professionaly
Rubber Soul, I owe my balance to your natural ablities.. performed so elequently
Now this poem comes to it's final creed
Rubber Soul, I can't deny that your honestly all I need</i>

 
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I can't describe the honor that I felt.. putting my heart and soul into that poem. One who really goes through life and realizes the metaphorical aspect of this poem, will be rewarded.

A tear rolled down my cheek... that's how deep this gets.
 

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Now this is true art. This has to be the BEST and I mean best piece of art to ever grace the esf forums. I thank you from bringing this work of art into my life and the lives of everyone else on these forums.
 
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Wow, I never really expected this kind of reaction, thank you all, I'm all teary eyed, you captured my piece beautifully Hwoarang.
 
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At first, I looked at it and said "Bleh, It's just a shoe." Then i read the poem and realized why the response was so... the way it is. Good job, now i have to go worship my shoe.
 
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Ice Man said:
At first, I looked at it and said "Bleh, It's just a shoe." Then i read the poem and realized why the response was so... the way it is. Good job, now i have to go worship my shoe.
also it is an elaborate joke
 
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