Redoing old Zabuza

[JTR]

Im trying to improve my old Zabuza.. Never really finished it either...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Models/7-ZabuzaSecond-Smooth-Front.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Models/7-ZabuzaSecond-Smooth-Side.jpg

I got a WIP of a new head.. I might redo the body afterward..

[Credits to Davidskiwan for the ref...]
New left.. Old right...

C&C.. More will come soon.. (Hopefully)

- JTR

 

[TRSS]

well i like it but the sword looks wayyyyyy to short

 

[JTR]

Comments on the new head only...
The rest is going to be redone/tweaked...

UPDATE:

Hair didn't come out to well... Ill try to tweak it a bit later..

 

[movento]

me likes.IIRC you didn't saw his lips in the anime.you have to many edges on the forehead,also to many poly's on his hair.but i love the rest,really looks like zabuza.

 

[Showster]

Erm you could always try this to do the hair, use like a series of planes for alpha mapping. Would save you alot of polygons, my thing is try not to model hair unless you have 1000's of polygons / shag fur. The way you've done it looks too artificial.

The change could make it look better and give you a tun of polygons to make a smooter face / more exaggerated features?

Regards

Greg

 

[JTR]

@ Movento
Thanks Ill cut some of hair of him.. and cut a few polies in the forhead

@ Showster
Thanks for the tip.. But the problem is that the mod is cell-shaded..
You cant use alpha-mapping on cellshaded hair, can you? Any ways.. thanks..
Ill just cut some of the hair.. I think I put to much in there..

EDIT:

UPDATE:

Tweaked the body... New hands and stuff.. Also some new hair..
Im going to add the missing features next... The hanging piece of cloth from his headband etc..

And here's something to compare with
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Models/7-ZabuzaSecond-Smooth-Front.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Models/7-ZabuzaSecond-Smooth-Side.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/JohnnyTheRipper/Models/7-ZabuzaSecond-Smooth-Per.jpg

- JTR

BTW for the mods.. Nutzzy allowed this "doublepost"...

 

[movento]

looks great,care to post some wires?.

 

[sir killalot]

what the hell is this man

 

[JTR]

You're spamming the whole modelling forum :S
It's Zabuza from the anime Naruto...
http://uploaded.fresh.co.il/2004/09/29/770105.jpg

Sorry for not posting wires or anything else..
Bought AoE 3 and BnW 2.. So havent got much time for modelling..
Ill post some when I feel like modelling on it again..

- JTR

And someone please post.. Such as I can update without any doublepost problems..

EDIT:

Thanks Shiyojin (Or Rommyu if it's Japanese )

 

[Adaptus]

You're spamming the whole modelling forum :S
It's Zabuza from the anime Naruto...
http://uploaded.fresh.co.il/2004/09/29/770105.jpg

Sorry for not posting wires or anything else..
Bought AoE 3 and BnW 2.. So havent got much time for modelling..
Ill post some when I feel like modelling on it again..

- JTR

And someone please post.. Such as I can update without any doublepost problems..

(Kay, here goes. :3)

The model looks slick and clean so far. I don't watch/read Naruto, so I can't say much about the proportions or the accuracy of the model, but as a model in and of itself, it looks pretty good to me.

Hurry up with those darn wires!

 

[ShadyD]

old head looked better

 

[bapplebo]

^ Agreed.

These are personal descisions, but I personally believe that you should make the arms more toned, and raise the crotch a little.