To give it a more anime-ish look, I'd suggest adding black outlines around the eyes and pupils, as well as sharp detail near the nose and mouth. Other than that, it seems like your map size is a little small. The black line down his face and the white of his eyes are very distorted. I would suggest raising the map size up just a tad.
Overall, it looks like it could shape up pretty nice.
I don't want to get into an arguement with you ryuujino, but when I say original I mean something of your own creation. Like the model that you modelled, its good, don't get me wrong. But when I look at your model it reminds me of an anime character. Anime is beginingg to be a big trend which I think will die out in a few years. You should try and draw some characters up (like futuristic characters, or aliens of some sort) and model from what you draw. Just my opinion