Poem in a picture.

[OubliezJe]

This is a poem i wrote, and decided to put it into a picture. theres not to much to the Picture but im satisfyed with it lol.
C&C on the poem and Picture. PLus if you dont have anything to say to make it better or nice to say dont put your input.

 

[Synth]

I'm surprised, it's a decent poem overall... but I would have preferred that the whole layout was organized better.

 

[Eon]

The color and placement of the text is horrible dude.

The text is faded in the dark parts making it look a bit weird. Try ot make the bg and the text have a little contrast..but not too much, you don't want the colors to clash.

 

[OubliezJe]

I c what you are saying. I noticed something looked funny, but seeing it was meant more for the poem i was going to make a quick background for it. But ill go back and edit it.