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[Alteh]

I've been workin on this all morning....and thank you orion the ideas and comments . and ruineren for the name . Im still open to comments and ideas for this. Anything to help will be apreciated.

 

[PiXel]

really... classical style!

Good JOB! i really like it! its clean

 

[Synth]

Ruineren aka Hwoarang :]

Hmm, I really like the color scheme, mixing red, yellow, and black is really pleasing to the eyes in my opinion. It really flows in the bottom left corner, the upper right needing some work. First, the lighter red above the black line needs to be removed, and the yellow arc needs to connect with the black line and follow it like the yellow line below the black line does. I would lose the yellow line at the very top as well, or organize it better, since it doesn't seem to really flow with the vector as a whole.

Other than that, I simply love it... good job.

8/10

 

[Alteh]

Thanks, I think I will change the yellow line and probably make it going now like the other red one...but something I don't understand is the part where you said the yellow arc needs to connect with the black line and follow it like the yellow line below the black line does.

Anyways thanks, I was wondering who ruineren was. lol

 

[Enix]

Its cool, but I hate those plus simbol things you keep
usuing. And some of the shapes are blurring and edgy.
And that red line running from the character shape to
the top looks kinda bad. But I like the style. 7/10

 

[Alteh]

ummm, I don't know what +'s your talking about?

 

[[SAS]Orion]

Its cool - im liking it a lot!

8/10!

 

[Enix]

ummm, I don't know what +'s your talking about?

The plus symbols in the background... they look like this +...
You use them alot, kinda like i used to use teh grid .

 

[Alteh]

It's the essance of the backroudn, it gives it feeling. looks more interesting with them.

*edit* update...here tell me what I should keep or change.

 

[Shinja]

I think it's teh secks with the splatters or whatever it might be (I probably made the word 'splatters' up just now because I couldn't find the correct word ).
Anyway, I like this one. It's a good composition and I think the (here I go again) splatters just make it nearly perfect. I'm looking to find something to improve

 

[wheres_]

here are some little things at 3 and 4 you can just see a bit of white next to the black, looks a bit off, at 1 and 2 you can clearly see where youve tryed to blur the lines then left them half way through.

Thats all, i think the rest looks sweet.

 

[Alteh]

Umm I don't see any white? Also I wasn't trying to blur the lines, it's just a little jaggy which I fix.