[NTP] Shikamaru WIP

[Enix]

Just started this yesterday and its almost done, just gotta do the skin and put some shoes on him^^. The basic skin layout is pretty much done. He has hair, the hair band, and two ROUND earrings. Poly count is at like 1800 or something. Here are some pics:

 

[VeGeTa14]

wow shikamaru. NICE! make his eyes, and mpouth relaxed, as he always are...
fun and nice... good job so far!

 

[RaVe]

Oooo nice model.

You couyld use that skin as a base for the final skin. You'll just need to fix the skintone a bit. The eyes look angry. He should look more relaxed unless he's put in a tense situation.

 

[darknavigator]

The symbol on his sleeve is supposed to be green, and also, the symbol is on his back (I believe). Eyes need to look like (-_-) kinda. Nice model though.

 

[Enix]

The symbol on his sleeve is supposed to be green, and also, the symbol is on his back (I believe). Eyes need to look like (-_-) kinda. Nice model though.

1. Wrong, its blue, go here if you dont believe me Click here

2. Right, just havnt added yet.

3. I might change the expression, but i made it mad since well...the game is gonna be combat and stuff, so why shouldnt he look tense? But i might change it too look like the combat is nothing for him

Uberdates later, just remapped the pants and skinned teh head protector.

And to RaVe and VeGeTa14, thanks ^^

Things fixed:

Eyes, mouth, pants, and hair line [added the edgey look]


OMG! I keep forgetting to tell you guys i used davids refs, i did when i posted it on the NTP forums but i forgot to here, SO I HUGE THANKS TO DAVID!

 

[dynamic`]

hey how about that hair
looks nice

 

[Enix]

hey how about that hair
looks nice

Ok ok, so you tought me how to make a nice hair texture [cant see it that well in the renders]

Here are some updates:

 

[dynamic`]

shikimaru "need.... more....... de...de........detailllllll"
*shikimaru dies*

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

he's going for the cell shaded aproach i suppose.

 

[Sirken Himuria]

1 thing i see wrong is the hair in and up to the band it should be in alil more he looks like a mad mom like that

 

[dynamic`]

even so,
in the show they was still folds at some areas

 

[RaVe]

Fix the hair up a bit by squeezing that rubber band in a bit, and make it so the hair in the back that's tied up looks like the picture you posted. Right now he looks like he put his hair into a flower pot, and broke the pot.

I'll try to show it in an ASCII diagram....
CRUDE ASCII DIAGRAM AHEAD

How the hair is supposed to look
 ---------\ _/------------\
 \            | |                  |
 /            | |                  |
 \            |_|
 /_______/   \
 
The hair is supposed to bend outwards a bit.
Right now, the hair you did sort of looks like this
                _
-----------| |-------------\
\              | |                   |
/              | |                   |
\              | |                   |
/_________|_|
                   \

I know, I sucks at ASCII. :(

EDIT : For some reason, it looks weird. Just hit your quote button and look at the diagram to see its correct form.

 

[VeGeTa14]

raiko, i think hair should be more spikes on it...
what about polycount?
updatet version rox! but there is dificult to see his mouth... and nose

and what about that blue belt on his left arm?

 

[Enix]

Blue belt? You mean the head protector? I modeled that on, and just skinned it. Poly count is at 1806. I havnt added the shoes yet, still gotto make them, and as soon as i do , its done. I know what you mean about the hair, i will fix it. updates soon, some unexpected plans came up today....im not really happy about it:\.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

Nice wip so far. Really captures shikamaru's *i dont care* image. Nice job.
Keep up the good work,
Icey

 

[darknavigator]

The top of his fishnet shirt has a err, green band on the top of it, like his coat.

 

[VeGeTa14]

raiko, yes, thathead protetor, he looks strange on his arms
like it not mach with arm or smth like that

 

[Nightcrawler]

he's looking troublesome, hehe

nice job only as said before make the hair more tight

 

[TheG0dlyMe]

the model has a nice texture to it. it's easy on the eyes.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

i made two renders for you
here's one:

and render two: