Nothings Left

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Nothings Left


Nothings left in this world of ours,
Following the great rift and showing you the great flowers,
Life is a beautiful thing,
Representing how smooth it is just like the angel's wings..

I stabbed myself today,
To show the world something,
You don't believe in me I say,
I've lost my will to survive..

The thought of you makes me quiver,
You send chills up and down my spine,
But how do you do it?
Is it because you helped lead this whole lie?

I am here to show you the path,
You throw me down,
Life is good,
Pushing me into blood and wishing me to drown..

The thought of you makes me shake,
I sometimes sweat myself awake,
The blood running through my veins,
The thought of you makes me excited in so many ways..

Nothings left for me to give to you,
But you seemed to absorb it all,
I'm sitting here waiting for you to come,
To push me into hell's halls..

I'm waiting..


 
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Excellent poem, even better picture. They both combine to give quite an eerie feeling. Superb work.
 
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Great poem and the picture says a lot, but mainly to me it shows the hand of man getting screwed by the "mechanical" arm that were severely connected to. i think poem is something anyone will find worth understanding and connecting with.

9/10, keep the artwork coming :)
 
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very good tim, again the pic is shocking me in a good way ;)

keep it up.
 
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Wow Tim, I'm speechless. Kind of reminds me of the Terminator.
 
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Man that's so awsome. I love the poem!!!!!!!! And the picture is awsome to. I like the long cut thing in the middle for some reason. :)
 

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