no brushing at all

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look what i made no brushing at allwhat do u think


 
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I think it looks pretty nice Kyo.
Two things bringing it down:
The font used for "Time is lost" & "Are we" texts. Bad choice in my opinion.
The black inner border, I think that you should change the color for a lighter one or remove the border.

What did you do instead of brushing?
 
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Yes, but now the font is misplaced. Place it a little more above the current place maybe?
 
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I think what Rayna is trying to say for the first one is the font for the words "Time is lost" and "Are we"

If you changed the font to a better one, it'd look great.

Now because you removed it- "Kyo" looks out of place and making that side more empty.

Which = not good.

Over all I like it.

For a border do this. You know how you made that black border on the inside, change that black to white, and see how that comes out. I think that'd make it look better.
 
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Fire Phoenix said:
I think what Rayna is trying to say for the first one is the font for the worlds "Time is lost" and "Are we"

If you changed the font to a better one, it'd look great.

Now because you removed it- "Kyo" looks out of place and making that side more empty.

Which = not good.

Over all I like it.

For a border do this. You know how you made that black border on the inside, change that black to white, and see how that comes out. I think that'd make it look better.
Yes, my point exacly.
The text was ok, it just needed a better font.
The border was ok too, it just needed a lighter color.
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