I like the effects that you used, but that's supposed to be a shield, right? Why not make it look more like a functioning shield? I don't mean you have to make it look like any shield swordsmen carried or anything, but it just sorta looks like some blobs right now.
I saw the same thing greentaco did the first time I looked at it. Though I could I see your explanation as well. It would make more sense though if it was, well a shield since you have that very noticably in the background. The word "shield" jumps pretty clearly. I don't like the 2D shapes you used in the background, they feel really out of place.
wow, really good comments...thank your very much guys
anyways:Greentaco, what ever it looks like to u is good for me, its up to your imagination
lonewolf:i saw Independance a fewe days b4 i did this, and i was accualy trying to get to that beam(i know its not that much alike).
Sugar:thanks for the great comment, i made it with bryce and then edited it in ps7.
mr.domino:i know that the 2d isnt much, i think its because im new to it, i hope ill get better
once again, thank you all ^_^