You don't necessarily have to create an effect for every letter of text. I also don't think it's necessary to make your clan logo the same as the tag in front of all your names. The parenthesis look weird in that font. May I also suggest that you use one font for the TIS logo, and a different, but visually complementing font for the headlines. The text also doesn't need to be that large, provided that it is still clear and legible. The logo looks fine that big, but the other text not as much. The plastic-wrap effect looks good. The concept seems fine to me. I think the colors in the banner need a little work, using all blues is fine, but you may think about darkening that Royal Blue in some areas, and the light blue sort of hurts my eyes. Maybe blending some blues warmer or grayer may help, whatever works for you.