New Goku WIP

[Super Veggeto]

buuhhh....

ok, this time guys, im not here for crits, for once i want to try and find the problems myself... :smile:
there will be ssj version, maby ssj2 and ssj3 too...
there might be a new vegetto too or a new gohan, but im gonna take it one at a time of course.
i reused my vegeta's arms model and skin and tweaked it a bit.
dont forget it's still WIP, so dont go crazy on me if you dont like it or something...
as usuall made from budokai 2 refs and blah blah blah...

 

[Cold Steel]

Can't really put my finger on it, but something just isn't right. Maybe the head is too big.

 

[ZuL]

Something about the pants is odd, and the head size might be slightly off, but...

I personally think you've just caught the feel of a perfected Goku face! Slightly tweak the face skin and it'll all be PERFECTO

Something about the hair doesn't seem too good... I can't put my finger on THAT.

 

[DBXMe2]

legs look kinda shortish, and I know its normal Goku praportions? but I say we all have a vote and ya, vot for longer legs, cause he looks offish right now with the DBZ praportions

 

[niobe]

the band's on the hand is to big and on the skin is the arm to mutch like a pic.
also on the front pic are the mussles to pointy.
that's all for now.

 

[SajaN^PridE]

Look guys, he said he does not want crits this time. Let him find the bugs him self. But i dont understand, why did u post it here if you dont want to hear crits?

Well anyway, great model.

 

[Super Veggeto]

But i dont understand, why did u post it here if you dont want to hear crits?

dunno, but i dont think you need a reasone to post your work here...

heh ok, i guess you like to crit, so ok ill follow the crits...just next time, try to read :smile:
anyway, the hair needs work on the side view, i know.
ill make the legs longer
niobe, the armband isnt big atall, although i know what you mean, kinda hard to explane it, but i can tell you that the anatomy is ok.
ill make the head a lil bit smaller, just a bit.
the muscles are "pointy" because it's not high poly.

well, ill fix those and ill update

p.s.

cold steel, come online

 

[TeKNiK]

the detail on the face skin isnt really all that noticable but aside from that and maybe a few tweaks to the model (mainly the chest fromt he side looks funny to me) and I'd tell you nice work.

 

[Kairi]

His torso is too wide.

 

[-Negmatic-]

Lengthin him out, his pody porpotions are a mix of goku and krillin. Good job so far.

 

[Super Veggeto]

the detail on the face skin isnt really all that noticable

if ill show a closeup pic, it will be noticable, the render is blury

His torso is too wide

trust me, it's not, if ill make the torso thinner, it will look out of proportions

small UPDATE:
fixed the arms proportion
made the legs longer

 

[Mystik_Black]

Its looks good so far except the Hair .. use this pic here .. maybe it will help you .. [ picture too big go on the link ]

Here

 

[SajaN^PridE]

The arms skin is different then the neck and face skin, a bit too shiny and *real*.

 

[imkongkong]

crotch is humongo long or his pants connect toooo low.. hehe or its just the angle but its really nice

 

[someone1074]

the crotch was mentioned...

otherwise great

may I ask how many triangles that model is composed of? and what program was this created in? thanks

 

[Super Veggeto]

i like the front view hair the way it is, the side however will be changed.
i might reskin the arms, or tweak it a lil
i took the crotch a lil up, not too much.
i made this model in milkshape3D, skinned it with photoshop 6 and the polycount for now is: 2585.
yea it's alot but i dont really care, i might take out some polys but even if it's still too high, i dont really care.

 

[Almighty_Gir]

knowin sv im gonna guess 2100 polies?? and max

just a guess tho

edit: me too slow

 

[bapplebo]

Crotch is unnatural. And I dunno, the head doesn't contain as much skin detail as the arms.

 

[GANGSTA229]

LOOKS GOODWILL THERE BE SSJ SSJ2 AND SSJ2 AND WILLIT BE FOR ESF

 

[DiZ]

well....