New Drawing(Excel Saga)

[Alteh]

Hey I drew this off a picture of excel saga. Please tell me what to change or add.

 

[Enix]

looks good exept for teh shading.good job! 8/10

 

[Alteh]

Ya I was wondering if I shouls shade in the vest thing she's wearing. I think I'll take it off.

 

[Morpherex]

I'd rate it a 3 out of 10. There's a lot of incorrect proportion areas, and with the anatonomy.

I don't really like how the arms get super skinny, and the torso is to big for the legs. It also looks a bit crooked. You should try drawing on the paper that has squares on it to help get rid of the tilting. For now you should study the human body . Just get some pictures and look at them trying to draw that and get it down then try your own.

 

[Marauder]

cute, abit out of proporstion(the face)
but its ok

 

[Alteh]

well she is supposed to be crooked because she is leaning to our right. And I didn't really take any time on the arms.