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Well, here's my first Naruto model.Any crits or comments?
 
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It is shown buddy. The head looks nice, but could you show us at different angles?
It could help us give you some crits.
looks nice from the front but something about the nose bothers me. lol
did he have a bridge or just a nose?? :D:D
nice start bud.
 
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Yeah lol, he probably edited his post xD
Well its a nice start i guess. looks really low poly, make the nose a lil bigger and the hair a lil bigger in hight.
 

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itll be good to see a top veiw, cuz his face looks too slanted, a head is usaly like
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e=eye
and urs is like
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too pointed, see hwat i mean?
 
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umm thats pretty damn confusing, make a pic in ps(or if you dont have that, in paint) and it will make more sense
 

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can we see a top veiw pls? ull proly see what i mean then
 
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i see what you mean its just its very confusing when using type to do it
make a pic
 
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Hm, the nose still bothers me.*Looks again*o_o!!!HES FOOTLESS!Lol heheh just playing :p.It looks pretty good so far, and about the nose.Wait can you show a flat shaded pic?
By the way you did a great job on the hair :D
 
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He´s for me to fat!
He got no ass and he got no knees! Try to make it others.... allover nice!
 

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At the moment, he is fat. Even his belt shows how chubby he is right now.. I'd say pull the belt in, widen the nose from the front and fix those odd hands. And add feet of course. Then the model'll be just fine ;)
 
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from side view hes way to fatt (his ass atleast =P) in front few...make him more buffed (he wasnt that skinny...his jacket made him look more buffed in front view) give the guy some knees \o/, thumb looks..weird...and maybe his arms should be a bit longer X-x
 
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here's a small update.And i also started Sasuke,but his hair is not done.



 
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well my crits to Naruto!


The Sasuke looks good so far! Just the only thing the Hair is ot complete! And the nose is to smoth and to round! good Job!

EDIT+++++
Between if u need good refs... go here : http://narutopix.littlecooldude.com/
 
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Well i suck at it.... But i shown him that the legs have to get Knees and that he have to change the Nose and the leg at the end! Aboiut that "you made him thinner" its right ! I want to show him that hes not a Fatboy!
 

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