Awesome. The nose and chin are the only problems I see. The nose is off direction. Unless your aiming for a buff character in anime, the chin shouldn't be rounded. Oh! And she doesnt have a cheek bone. Start at a bit from the eyes, it should go down almost stright (a
slight curve though)and then incline to the make the chin about at the bottom nose. Its awesome for a first try. You should some some of my early anime