my NEW art! [for a future manga type story]

Does esf need and adult Gohan?

  • Yes, dressed as the Great Saiya-man

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  • Yes, dressed in the same uniform as Goku

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  • No, just young Gohan but dressed in Saiyan armor

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  • NO, i liked Gohan as he is now

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OK...some of you may know me (vashTS, .fma, TimK.) ...but I havn't been on my computer (it broke and still is) for months(like anyone even knowticed haha). But, I've done some drawings every once in a while since then.
I'm actually planning on making some sort of story thing (almost like manga) someday. Soo I'm designing a bunch of characters for it.

[also my website here has all of these and more so feel free to look around]

Here are some scans (ya my scanner sucks):

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/kick.gif"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/ks.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
The main character "soccer kicking" some guy.

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/me05.gif"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/me05s.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
This one is actually me. (basically traced from an actuall photo,except I redid the lighting)

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/balloons.jpg"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/bals.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
Random kid with balloons.

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/c11.jpg"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/c11s.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
Main character's friend. This one actually has the rest of half of his body drawn on another page, but i didnt ever finish it so its just an outline.

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/bro.jpg"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/bros.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
Main character's little brother.

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/c9.gif"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/c9s.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
Little brother's kendo teacher. This is actually a bunch of separate drawings grouped together.

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/daniel_side.jpg"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/dss.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
Main character.

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/daniel_3_4th.jpg"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/d34s.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
Main character. (ya i know, perspective on face is screwed)
 
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some more...

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/eye.jpg"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/eyes.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
My eye.

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/girl.jpg"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/gls.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
Some little girl.

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/friend.jpg"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/frs.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
Main character's other friend.

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/meanime.gif"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/animes.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
I dont know.

<a target="_blank" href="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/kickbw.jpg"><img src="http://timk.sytes.net/images/drawings05/kbws.jpg" width="50" height="50" border="0"></a>
For those of you who live in black and white.

Theres alot more older ones on my site.

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Im rarely on my computer anymore so u can comment but i wont be able to reply very often. Other than that, have fun.
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nice stuff man, liking it all ^_^ like the style and expressions =P the only thing i think you need to work on really is proportion, there are a few shots where things dont look quite right, and the anatomy/perspective is a lil screwed, but on the most part its all sexy =P i really like the vector of yourself ^_^
 
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hehe ya, theres a ton of messed up proportions (never took a drawing or anatomy class so ur gunna have to forgive me for that hehe). I wont be trying to draw perfect or near perfect untill i begin my story.

Im also trying to develop my own style. It's like a blend of realism, anime, and western comics.
 
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heh, i know what thats like, i still havent got my style sorted :(.... best thing to do about proportions is just to practice them over and over, get a good anatomy book and if you get chance try to do some observational, you might know this already, but check http://www.saveloomis.org/ for some awesome anatomy books.
 
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Wow cool, any tips on how to NOT make guy look slike girls (bodies) anyway... Keep it up Your really good
 
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sweet, ill check it out. thx david.

and Kurisutaru, well try adding some muscle or not making the bodies so smooth if u want it to look like a guy. haha funny thing is i have trouble drawing girls, well...i actually havent tried to draw one yet though, so i cant really say.

but like Davidskiwan said, jus practice.
 
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vash_TS said:
sweet, ill check it out. thx david.

and Kurisutaru, well try adding some muscle or not making the bodies so smooth if u want it to look like a guy. haha funny thing is i have trouble drawing girls, well...i actually havent tried to draw one yet though, so i cant really say.

but like Davidskiwan said, jus practice.

Trust me I am , Ive been practicing for about 3 yrs and my guys come out all wrong... I try to do the muscle but it looks off blance with the body >< and i like bishi guys so thats probly where im getting my trouble from XD... * goes and Practices*
 
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For the first one was way to unrealistic. How can you kick like that if your back is straight?
 
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long muscels dude i can kick (almost) streight up all you need to do is stretch them allot anddont make them bulky these stretching exercises are often refferd to as kata's there in karate and aikido (maybe more i dont know)
 
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yeah but your back has to bend alot to be able to do that, thats what he was getting at >_<
 
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I like your quality of the lines. You can see depth and first plan in some of them and thats pretty cool.

Thumbs up dude ;D
 
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Well i have to agree with dj swift, Thats the Edward Elric type of kick, but he had Auto-mail you know. But i love how you did the wrinkles on the clothes.
everything else in it looks fine to me. (oh yeah, Ed rulez)
 
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Jariroth, once a post is two weeks old we consider it dead. I'm not going to close it as it's the artists' right to revive it when he has something to add, but you don't have that excuse.

Please, unless you have anything something incredible to add, do not revive dead posts.
 
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mf29 said:
how do i post a picture?
Click the little picture of mountains and insert the link to the picture. I like the artwork. Good job I can't wait to see this story youve been talking about. *oops didnt know that this thread was dead once* uh oh. A mod will close this... mf29 this was the wrong place to ask how to post a picture...
 

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