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Hiya

I dicided to make my first wallpaper, and I'm pretty satisfied with the result :)

The pic of Gohan is by AZN_Dragon all credit goes to him

any c&C + suggestions is welcome

grtz Naz-

 
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Damn, for a first wallpaper thats pretty good!
Maybe not fade the image of gohan so much and add some more effects to the background (if you can think of any).
 
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Nice, but the hue saturation is outta control on Gohan. Try lessenning the effects on him by dragging him to the fore-front of the picture.

Otherwise an exellent wallpaper, especially for your first.
 
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One main thing that I notice that the text on the top runs into the stroke on your shape... space those apart, and as Cuc said make Gohan more of the focus, and I think you're golden. Nice work for a first. :)
 
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not bad, altho i can't say im a fan of the colours :eek:

but yeah as ryoko said, nice job :D
 

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