My first real try to model

[webber]

Well it's Kakashi. the ref for the head was different to the one for the body(not in the same picture) so it might look wierd.

As you can see it has no hair. That's becouse i have no ideea of how to make it.
Anyone care to comment or help?

 

[Yo-MoMa]

only thing that disturbs me is the hands and feet. overall its good

 

[ShadyD]

Nice start
Try to get a S shaped back in there.
Move the arms back slightly
Makes it look more dynamic and alive

Check out the crotch area of some more "professional" models, Compare it with yours and you'll notice yours is a bit funky.. lol..

 

[webber]

i will take count of the sugestions but can anyone help me make the hair?
Tutorials or something

 

[-Nataku-]

well i like it, : D its hard to see the wire but its not a bad start !
btw your ssjgoku 83?,

 

[ShadyD]

for the hair make a triangle, duplicate it 4 times and make a pyramid out of it.
Now just move it in position and duplicate the pyramid a few times.

 

[movento]

err dude....that's robo killa his kakashi.Ripping is bad you know ;/

 

[ShadyD]

err dude....that's robo killa his kakashi.Ripping is bad you know ;/

Only accusate if you have proof..
Post your proof before accusing.

 

[movento]

looks like he edited or made the head by himself but the rest is just a lame ripp-off =/.

 

[webber]

looks like he edited or made the head by himself but the rest is just a lame ripp-off =/.

You're wrong, i used this as a ref for the body.

 

[ShadyD]

First off, its wrong to use other models as "reference".
That person worked just as hard as you did gathering refs and perfecting it.

Second off, Movento is right, the polyflow from that model resembles yours allot.. Since that one was made before yours the conclussion isn't even nessecary to be stated.

Try drawing or screengrabbing your own refs..
Using other models as ref is considered ripping/cloning.. on these forums anyway.

 

[webber]

So this means i have to remake the WHOLE body?
Ahhhhh s***.
Then does someone have a kakashi body ref?

 

[Super Veggeto]

So this means i have to remake the WHOLE body?
Ahhhhh s***.
Then does someone have a kakashi body ref?

Remake? nope, since you didnt model the body in the first place you can call it...making from scratch for the first time =P.

As for refs, Google is your friend.
Have this for starters:

 

[ShadyD]

Hmmm naked heels...
I always thought it had some bleu stuff there?

 

[webber]

Well i started all over again.
It's harder without a proper ref, but here is the vest:

 

[Jariroth]

Actually that looks much better than the first body. Its good to have little bit personal touch rather than using somebodys model as ref. Also you learn to get better at modelling when doing it your way.
The back of the jacket is bothering me tough. It looks a bit strange from side view...

 

[Nuttzy]

thanks for handling that guys, i was kinda busy all day yesterday and today, i kinda skimmed through this thread, but i didnt notice the cloning right off the bat.

of course he did post the ref himself=/, maybe it was my mistake =).

in any case, yeah cloning is bad. unless of course the modeller in question doesnt care one way or another, then its fair game

 

[ShadyD]

looks better, place the upper torso a bit back.

Lol nuttz posted... how rare.. Nice av xD

 

[webber]

Well it's kinda finished:

Crits and comments are more than welcomed (drawovers if required).
Oh and another thing: Should i keep the previous head or try another one?

 

[ShadyD]

his hips look femenine.. more like.. hinata's

his wrists are twisted..

Fix those!
Make a new head, the old one was fine but more practice never hurts!