My first real CG

[Devion]

Well for the first time I started CGen for real

I already finished it, but crits and suggestions are still welcome

P.s. Lineart is not mine :x

 

[dudeman]

try doing ALOT more with the cracks n folds in the clothes..

especially the jacket and the pants need work.. if you want, i can do it right now to show you what i mean,

 

[Devion]

I understand what you mean.

/me goes back to the drawing board >_>

 

[sayan master]

well nice but i think it dont have that touch...so i cant realy give u any critz cuz i aint that grate CG painter....so i need to train befor i will fix problams that i dont know about...=/

 

[Marauder]

well,its very nice,but there is a lack of detail...like dudeman said..folds n stuff