My first real attempt at anime

[Mewtwo]

This pic is my first attempt at dawing my own anime character. I used the tuts at www.howtodrawmagna.com to help.

I can already see a few problems that need fixing, what do you all think?

 

[TimTheEnchantor]

ITS A RABBIT-MAN!

his face is too pudgy, his legs look like pretzels, and his hair is very um, full of gel?

fix those and we'll see how it looks

 

[Morrone]

The animation part of it is very good. Meaning it looks like he is running and taking his sword out like you intended but the character himself is ugly looking, his face does look like a rabbit.

 

[GhostfaceKillah]

needs some face work, the rest is tolorable

 

[Chitenga]

Fix the hair she looks bald

if you fix the hair then the face whould be ok.

 

[Mewtwo]

She? lol the face must be really bad, oh well thanks for the advice anyway everyone. oh and sorry for my long absence I kept going to www.esforces.com/forum and getting a 404 error and I thought the site was still down .

 

[MEGGEDO]

Dammit mewto i told you at school and you know what i said then....dont you?
his face, legs and everything looks a bit retarted.