My First Model

[phatbear]

yeah i started it yesterday
yes it is my first model from scratch
the only other thing ive done was some tuts but i got bored of them and that was bout 1 year ago
its just a human model with a hooded vest and shorts
i drew my own refs
yesterday i did the vest n shorts

and 2day i did the 2 arms

im gonna start the legs soon
then the head
but im sick as a dog atm
just wanna no what i can improve
im using 3dmax
and its not skinned, cos i have no clue how to do skins

 

[LaHeen]

it looks, umm nice, weres his ass lol? those arms probably wont deform very well either, wat is the poly count in faces not quads , and yes gj for your first player model.

 

[phatbear]

it looks, umm nice, weres his ass lol? those arms probably wont deform very well either, wat is the poly count in faces not quads , and yes gj for your first player model.

i dont have a clue what ur talkin bout.... :laff:
but i can fix the ass

 

[Enix]

thats actually really good, just add some shape to the arms and dont be afraid to add fingers. maybe give him sleeves instead of it going off into his arm. And maybe like make the back go inwards and make the chest go outwards. Very nice for a first. Good job.

Drawover:

Sorry m8 im addicted to drawovers now :laff: but maybe something like that.

 

[zeldalink]

looks nice man and anatomicly corect just onel little thig give him fingers

 

[phatbear]

an update
i tried to fix what u guys spotted and i added the legs n shoes
naruto style shoes, dont no y but i just felt like using them

now the head needs to b done....


*edit*
does any1 have any tips on how to start a head....

 

[phatbear]

this is the latest i fixed arms, made the top a bit loose, lowered the chest, tryed to fix the ass but eh..
and yeah i need tips on how to start the head cos its the only thing left to do

 

[ShatteredForte]

Looking good! Its looking pretty good for a first model!

 

[Enix]

always do heads, and faces poly by poly. Never do them form a sphere or anything. Gj, kinda wierd about the naruto shoes, but ok....

 

[phatbear]

its finished, until i learn how to do skins n stuff
but yeah this is enuf 4 me for now
if u spot things ill fix em otherwise its done
btw its not supposed to b any1, its a fictional character that i made up

 

[LaHeen]

nice, the face looks a little flat ^_^, but its good for a first, gj hope to see mre of your work

 

[dynamic`]

lenghten the legs
he looks like a dwarf right now

 

[Marauder]

sweet
very nice for a first model..
add abit muscle structure...then it will be much cooler