my dying bride

[Valeska]

Just A Memory Of My X-gf,
felt like making something that would hurt.
even i dont like the sig, but i like the phome i just made up.

For My Fallen Angel...
Every Fallen Feather For A Bad Action,
Every Little Piece Of my Heart Fading A Way...
Recognizes My Reaction,
I Dont Give Myself The Factions, For My Reactions.
I Must Shame Putting Your Name In Vain.

Ill Go On With This Pain,
Hoping You'll Remember My Name.
Will It Ever Be The Same...
All The Love And White Wings Without Of Shame And Pain.
This Is For My Fallen Angel...
For My...
I'd Just Said Goodbye...

 

[Dask]

That style you keep using, just brushing textures and bluring it.. is ugly, smudge it or something. and those squares in the corner are too distracting.

 

[Valeska]

i didnt make the background edward did,
next to that its about the stock and the phome,
dont really mind the sig and his background,text, and effects, just the stock

 

[Synth]

The stock goes well with the poem, portraying that your inner soul is eating you alive.

Also, I'm not going to even crit the sig, because that obviously wasn't the point.

 

[Valeska]

The stock goes well with the poem, portraying that your inner soul is eating you alive.

Also, I'm not going to even crit the sig, because that obviously wasn't the point.

thank you for the good understanding

 

[TeKNiK]

i didnt make the background edward did,
next to that its about the stock and the phome,
dont really mind the sig and his background,text, and effects, just the stock

Bleh, Why even post that then? It's pointless.

 

[Synth]

To crit the poem, and how it works well with the image in the sig. I seriously am considering this to be spam.

On second thought... *moves to artwork*

 

[TeKNiK]

Exactly. God lighten up hwoarang I expressed my opinion that's all.

As for the poem. It's alright, but nothing admirable. Kinda reminds me of somethign i wrote in my 10th grade poetry class.