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Very nice rendition. I'd like to see some more shading though to show the difference in color around the character. That is, if you are more of a manga artist rather than a color comic kinda guy.
 
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very good but what is that black thing on the side of his face? if that's suppose to be shading well it doesn't look much like it
 
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Doesn't look like a footprint on the right to me :x

Nice, but it looks like a low quality scan or photocopy because of the faded lines. Try making the outside lines more defined.
 
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His face goes to much like this \/ but besides that its pretty cool.
 
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well, looks nice, but under the shoulders near the down end of the drawing, it looks rushed, and the "footstep" looks more like shading with a pencil, so i dont blame you if it didint got right with the scanner, and as freak sad, the face had a \/ form...
other then that, the face looks real good,...

nice... 7/10 considering your stil learning
 
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haha rofl... why didint i knew that... 0_o
 
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I like it ^_^. You should try and clean it up, then maybe someone can CG it ? I wouldn't mind a try.
 
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i thought it was colloring, but i am not sure.... ?
 
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It is coloring. It's coloring on the computer. Don't mean to be mean or anything but, you should know the words you use for sure, before you use them.
 
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Yeah the shading needs to look smother.
Like my Art teacher says: It need more shading and texture.
 

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