My drawing of a girl (totally my own for once!)

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My drawing of a girl (totally my oen for once!)

Ok so its a character I thought up and yes.. im not very good but at least I tried right?



Im going to cg it later, I think S-bolt is helping me ink quickly, and giving me pointers ^-^;;

Can I get some good, honest critism's and comments? I would really appreciate it as I am going to try to learn to draw. Do you thibk I have a chance? :laff:
 
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The turn in the eyes is weird. The nose is out of place. The mouth is... I dunno it doesnt look right. Her face is to round. And fix the hair, she has a cut on her left side. And the spikes on the top right eye is to bold.

Its a good start but needs fixing.

7/10
 

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It looks ok :p i think it will be much better when uve finished it ^^
for a out of ur head picture tho its pretty good i cant draw for s**t out of my head :p
 
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:eek:! Looks cool, except the eyes look wierd with those turnings around the eyes. Fix the eyes, and that really reminds me of Archie Comics... ^.^
 

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like i said on msn, the eyes man, the eyeeeezzzzz, she looks like shes on drugs or shes very sleepy... :p

also like the other say.. the head is in a somewhat weird angle and the face is bit too round.. also the hair isnt completely my thing :O
 
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looks as if shes high Oo
but not bad Ryoko :)
 
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w00t finally somethin' else then the holy ryoko...

well i agree with most things gonadz said..
but i wonder what it will look like if u inkn'paint it..
 
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well the eyes need some work but it´s still quite good =)
 
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the face reminds me of something i might see on cyborg 009. good work though.....7/10
 
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Nice drawing, only thing that i would change is the pupil position, she looks kinda high to me now...:p The hair is really great.
 
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I agree with Nadz about there eyes and nose

Also her hair kinda makes her look like she has a beard
 
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i dont like it verry much, but its good, its kinda, undetailed,and you have drawn the head in a strange way, looks like the neck has a corner like this;

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do you understand what i mean? anyways, gj.
7/10
 
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7/10 for me.It looks like shes a bit stoned and also the hair near her chin looks like a beard(not offending the pic)but for that i shall give 9/10 i'm not joking i love to laugh heaps i just crack up man i don't know whats wrong with me!!!???
 
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/me also adds what he just noticed

Her neck looks kinda thin are her eyes have wobbles in them on the left side
 
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Very nice, indeed Ryoko.

Wonderful free hand pic. Much better than I could do. :x
 
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Just a very quick and poo cg. But I tried to fix the errors you guys said. Like the eyes and the mouth posistion.
 
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Yay! No more wierd eyes = pwnage so far. Brilliant work. :smile:
 
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replay to coloring

I really like the shading you have done on it the drawing. I would like to see more detail with the hair and more defind lines. It lools good as is but could be better if you get a little more detail into it. ^_^
 
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Very good ... no more haxor eyes :D

8/10 soo far ... get rid of that giraffe effect tho :p
 

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