Dude i don't think fanfic are that short i mean come on seven years and thats what you make with seven years of work you could make a book with more then 300 pages this is just less then 1 sorry but you could use a lot of improved and so on anyways it good to laugh at it for one sec but sorry i just don't like it remake it longer each chapter with back story and maybe ill like it.
you know why i kinda like you Dam...Because you're funny )(and you keeped the serious voice after some posts) i liked how you let us to think that you actually worked 7 years for that piece of crap ) Great Job
Damera, This was a stunning and brillant Fan-fic and I can even go as far to say that this shit is better than the actual DBZ
Very good character development, the first lines and "Dad" was mentioned ovbiously giving us a clue that Isaac/Gosaac is Goku's 3rd Son (How does Chi-Chi and Bulma survive these?) The Power of Seven years can do a lot Dam, and you've demonstrated that.
Also the chapters were super LONG! I loved it Dam! And Yet I still want more!