My DBZ Story!

[Damaera]

Ok well I was reading the DBZ story someone made, and I was like..... What the hell, I should make one too! So here it is:

The Saiyan
Battle’s


Character’s:
Goku
Vegeta
Gohan
Goten
Trunks
Chi-Chi(W/e)
Bulma
Krillin
Isaac(New)
Other people




Ch.1
The big train

“Hey dad, Let’s train!” Isaac yelled.
“Okay what ever.” Goku said.

“Ready……. Set…… FIGHT!!!!” Gohan yelled
“HHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!”
Isaac screamed by going SSJ.“AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” Goku screamed, The ground shook and Goku went SSJ.

“Ka-Me-Ha-Me-HA!!!!” “Whoa! Your’e strong Isaac!” Goku said. “What the Hell?” “OW that hurt! Okay, Okay Isaac you win!”Goku said. “Good I’m happy we are done cuz I’m hungry!
“Heh Heh Heh…. Your’e getting just like me son!”






Ch.2
Majin Buu


“What the hell was that!” Isaac said curiosly. “Buuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!” Buu flew and ran into the house” “Holy **** your fat!” Goku said. “Buu no like u! Buu *****-slap you!” Buu said like a mental retard. “No you don’t! ……AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH……

Time to die fatass!” Goku said

“What the hell are you doing dad!” Isaac said. “Isaac shut the hell up I know what I’m doing!” Goku said.
“Okay, What ever you say

“BBUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!” “Ow…… That fatass hurt me! “I told you dad! Now it’s my turn!”
Ch.3
Isaac Vs. Buu

“It’s over now Buu, You should never hurt my dad!” “I can kick your ass too!” Buu said “What ever fatass.” “KAMEHAMEHAAAAAAAAA!!!!!”

“What the hell are you doing! You are hurting the badass of all Majin Buu!!

“I told you I would kick your ass!”





To be continued……….
Tomorrow






Well tell me how it was, it may suck too but who cares the hell with it it was fun

 

[greentaco]

Talk about random... and useless...

 

[Synth]

a chapter was 4 sentences.....

 

[Deverz]

To be blunt it sucks

Not written like a story at all

Almost no description of anything just talking.

I suggest you work on your writing skills before you post on this forum again, Your sure to get flamed next time