My attempt for a sprite

[Arsenovicius]

The title says what's up here.

So this is my first sprite

CnC me please

 

[MF29]

It took me awhile to actually find out where the sprite actually was, it's good but there's too many gun shot holes inside, remove some of the white spots and keep the other spots with color, and also the horizontal yellow bar going across the sprite guards pure vision of the focal point.

 

[Arsenovicius]

I guess so

Thanks