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hello every 1 sry it this seems lame but i need somehelp making this look realistic or just shadowed and colored better, i made it on MS Pain *t* if some 1 could plz help me this is going on the back of my grandmaws grave and it's really special to me... thx

PS: it's Elvis, she was a HUGE fan... she even stole a paice of his wall haha

 
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The tears look a little... strange. It's all right.
 
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Those tears look like something I've seen in po......a movie Ive seen.

Either the nose or the mouth is throwing me off. It resembles elvis, but I couldnt tell just by looking at it.
 
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It's ok, but the curve on the lower lip looks strange and so do the tears, remind me more of a waterfall than tears.
 
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you changed the mouth, looks better now. I just noticed another thing, the tears falling through the wrinkle by his mouth cut too roughly in my opinion.
 
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Sorry bout your grandma. Looks nice though. If you made the hair more Elvis like it'd be more distinguishing. And you said you needed help, this isnt much but I made the tears look more like tears for the cartoony look and changed the hair. Hope you dont mind.
 
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I think he changed the color and made it thicker.
 
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Zeonix said:
I think he changed the color and made it thicker.
True, I see it when looking more closely.
Well Volosity's tears are better off so far, since he made them more transparent like and they didnt really need to be thicker.
 
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i realy can't do anything better then this lol, can some 1 plz help me

 
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I think that looks a bit better than before. Just keep at it, it's how you learn.
 
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ahah there is no suck thing as learning with MsPain haha
 
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I think you got it. THe tears look fine now. Good job. Maybe if you added glasses you would be able to tell it was elvis more. But it's still really good. I probably couldnt even make that on photoshop but on MS paint O_O Thats really really good. *edit* whats that thing inbetween his ching and his addams apple it looks like a little flab of skin or something. Is it part of his neck?
 
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Volosity said:
ahah there is no suck thing as learning with MsPain haha
I meant it more as in drawing and representing what you are trying to.
 
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still trying... i don't really like it witout the line lol i will try the line back with glasses :p any 1 with PS wanna help haha... i think this 1 looks *** :p

 
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It does look better witht he line. I could easily put the line back on if you wanted me to.
 
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uhmm i would color those crying drops light skin color <_< looks to much white to me.. also the crying drops aint can go this way... if, then he wouldnt have any checks ;)

but its alright to me ;)
 

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