Mr. Anderson! Surprised to see me?

[041leo041]

i think his nose is to big !
http://www.propstore.com/images/products/431/matrix-smith-dvd2.jpg

 

[ShadyD]

Looks great DS... however, you'll notice that the actor has a very pronounced brow bone structure; making his eyes appear to sink in a bit too far. I think the other model captured that feature almost perfectly. Also, his cheeks puff out a little bit on the sides, keep that in mind. Keep working on it though.

I think Im gonna start Neo

isnt that what ive been trying to say all along!? neways , eyebrows can be defind with glasses. *turners model*

 

[Mr. Phonso]

okay i can do that.

 

[DBZhell]

i think there's something with his lips.... he looks very sad....
try to make him to look angry

 

[ShadyD]

[img=http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/1618/untitled1copy9ul.th.jpg]
try this

 

[CrackerJack]

His hair reminds me of the fonz.. not really I guy in his 40's-50's

maybe just me

 

[Mr. Phonso]

looks better now.. http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/3240/smith3vs.png

 

[Almighty_Gir]

looks better now.. http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/3240/smith3vs.png

in your opinion....

to be honest, your still not changing the important things, your just adding more crap to it that doesnt even need to be there yet!

i'll say it one final time, and maybe youll understand.

SILHOUETTE!

sil·hou·et·ted, sil·hou·et·ting, sil·hou·ettes

To cause to be seen as a silhouette; outline: Figures were silhouetted against the setting sun.

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and why dont you ever post your model in a way that will get you some accurate advice? are you worried about people seeing more flaws than already?

 

[Mr. Phonso]

whats wrong with perspective?

and i think its looking better -_-

and for god sakes i am changing the silhouete, just look at them for more than 5 seconds and you'll see what i have done

do a damm drawover or something that will help me

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[imkongkong]

can u post a front and side pic? =)

 

[Mr. Phonso]

ok, and if you got something to say, please say it in drawover form.... if you can >___________<

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/5038/front3qh.png

 

[CrackerJack]

face looks kinda squished from he side

 

[imkongkong]

now compare =)

 

[LaHeen]

teehee ^_^

I am loving the look of it so far, though, since you are putting quite a lot of polygons into the head, why not put some more in the body?

 

[TeKNiK]

whats wrong with perspective?

and i think its looking better -_-

and for god sakes i am changing the silhouete, just look at them for more than 5 seconds and you'll see what i have done

do a damm drawover or something that will help me

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Don't get all *****y because he's trying to help you. You've ignored some basic rules of modeling particularly for higher poly. You should almost always get the shape or Silhouete spot on before going in and adding the detail to the face. You've not done this and now the face of the model, doesn't resemble Agent Smith in the least. (though it's starting to improve). I'd suggest going back and looking At some of Ben's Modeling tutorials, particularly the ones that deal with blocking out the model BEFORE adding any detail.