Moonlight Sonata

New Member
Joined
Jan 15, 2003
Messages
872
Best answers
0
At night the city becomes alive. It speaks.

Edit: It can be alot larger, this is the resize.

 
New Member
Joined
May 18, 2004
Messages
520
Best answers
0
This is a really cool concept, i dig it.

The pic looks great from a colour standpoint, everything blends and is in harmony. The projection on the pillars is the only thing that strikes me as wrong.

I know the text is projected at a weird angle, and is bound to have an effect on the way the text wraps around the pillars, but as it is now it looks as if the pillars are inside out, and have a 1 sided texture (gah, 3dsm on the brain). Basically the way the highlights are cast makes the pillar look like its its a weird concaved shape. Now i know because of the way the lettering is projected it would do that on a cylinder, but to combat it you need to add some falloff around the edges of the pillars to make the text "fade out" as it goes out of view, and also make it straighten out a little as it falls off around the edge. Hopefully that should get rid of the concave effect, and the pic will be truly awesome.

just my 2c ;)
 
Active Member
✔️ HL Verified
💻 Oldtimer
Joined
Dec 18, 2001
Messages
1,640
Best answers
0
In the words of a certain infamous advert...

"i'm lovin' it!"

=P
Great work tim, lovely photo :)
 

Bolteh2

B
Guest
no advertising on these forums orion -_-

god damn you.. have a warning ;) =p (j/k)


i like it =O i have the same thing in my room, but with chinese signs (and a lot smaller) but the effect is the same =)
 
New Member
Joined
Apr 16, 2002
Messages
518
Best answers
0
the block in the middle seems well too busy. other than that good job

-SaN
 
New Member
Joined
Jan 15, 2003
Messages
872
Best answers
0
Well its mostly composition, and I couldnt turn off any light in the cylinder so I took what I had.
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top Bottom