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These are some lyrics i wrote, tell me what you think.
What sounds better?

As we go on in one direction.
The past in our life creates our reflection
The hurt and infliction of Pain and corruption
Created by hatred and death from us turn into nothin
or

As we go on in one direction.
The past of our lifes create our reflection
The hurt and infliction we cause
Drops the innocent lives and
And breaks our laws!

Here is the song.
**One Big Dream**

The times of the past are gone.
Your life from memory moves on.
Time slows down. Hold your breath.
The footprints of yesterday never left

The whole in your mind creates a tear
Lies of today bring all of your fears
One big dream
That leaves the scars
The past of yesterday
Created by bars
Still in your mind, wishing to forget
All of the time, You try to quit.

Jesus christ forgives our sins…
Brings our hearts back, and lives again.

*
As we go on in one direction.
The past of our lifes create our reflection
The hurt and infliction we cause
Drops the innocent lives and
And breaks our laws!
*
**
And you know who to tell.
And you know he’ll protect you from hell.
And you know what lies beneath.
And you know he’ll save you and me..
**

The lies of tomorrow, and today…
Bring the sorrow of night and day.
Good and bad face the earth
Triumph and failure bring such hurt

Yet his love never fails
Brings forth and always prevails
A someone you can trust
To clear the dust of your past away
and let you live that life that was taken away.

*
As we go on in one direction.
The past of our lifes create our reflection
The hurt and infliction we cause
Drops the innocent lives and
And breaks our laws!
*
**
And you know who to tell.
And you know he’ll protect you from hell.
And you know what lies beneath.
And you know he’ll save you and me..
**


***
You still fear the coming of tomorrow
When there will be no past or sorrow.
But the times of today get in the way
Block your mind, and turn you away.

Let not the world change your heart
But bring you together, not apart.
Sister brother, mother and father.
Names forgotten, there such a bother

The heart is so over rated
Under minded and x rated
Treat it badly, and it will hurt you gladly

For those of you who understand.
Raise your hands and Scream it
Bring it to me, I can handle it

*
As we go on in one direction.
The past of our lifes create our reflection
The hurt and infliction we cause
Drops the innocent lives and
And breaks our laws!
*
**
And you know who to tell.
And you know he’ll protect you from hell.
And you know what lies beneath.
And you know he’ll save you and me..
**
 

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got any music to go with these...words?

"Names forgotten, there such a bother"

They're*


and what kind of music is this for?
 
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It will most likely be turned into a slow/fast paced rock song, not punk, but more of a Chevelle/breaking benjamin sound.

As of music for the words, none as of yet, reason i jsut wrote them lol. probably within the month there will be a tune for them. Other than that i have the song in myhead and how it will go.
 

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If you ever plan on writing music, music first, lyrics second. It is a lot harder to put music to lyrics than lyrics to music.
 
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yeah, i know, happened before, but with this one, i wanted to write the music around the lyrics this time. Going to take some time, indeed, but for this song, ill take the time.
 

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