Lyrics is also artwork..

[Xsis]

right?

well.. Finnaly after the long extended battle against hate with my ex. I won.. it was like i was in a trance mode or something.. I weren't myself. and now.. everybody is mentaly breaking me apart. so I wrote this lyric about my eks. and a poem about my life right now.

You f***ing told me
That you loved me
Now I don't care anymore
I f***ing hate you
You’re a cucksucker
Your little motherf***er!
I’m going to kill you
And kill your boy too.
So go away you slut
Cause its all just f**k!

You bring me down
You caused me trouble
I think I’m seeing double
Maybe it’s just the weed
It tastes sweet.
I can't f***ing think
Because you were a b**ch!
You look like Stitch!
That little ****ing alien
A sweet little thing
I just wanna strangle

I only feel Violence
This is my vengeance
If you f***ing touch me
Ill rip you apart.
Ill take your heart
And crush it in the earth
And hope there’s no rebirth!
Cause you’re just a slut!
Now it’s nothing but a but.

You made me unfaith
At the time we were together
With him you were forever
Ill beat you till you faint
Arghh! I can feel the pain
I can see the horror in your eyes
Every time you watch someone dies
Hate is flowing in my vein
Now all I can see and hear
Is that you will come near
So I can take all my hate away
And walk my own way.

You f***ing hurt me
Every time we are together
I wanna see my redemption
It will come with concemption
All my depressions will be true
But only when I’m with you
I f***ing hate pathetic humans
That are incomplete like you
Close your eyes and leave me
In an instant I’ll fade away
from your little way

Your boy is just a little brat
A pathetic little rat
I guess I don't care anymore
He wants to fight but I know
He’ll lose just like you
All this s**t I write
It’s only for one right?
You know who I talk about
Now I would love to SHOUT!

GO AWAY YOU f***ING SLUT
I DON'T WANNA SEE YOU ANYMORE
DIE b**ch DIE!
BLEED!
AND FEEL THE PAIN I'VE FELT!
NOW YOU’RE THE ONE WHO NEEDS HELP!

Now all my regressions has gone away
You’re out of my life b**ch
Finally I can walk my own way
And I’m not gone astray.
Goodbye b**ch hope you live a miserable life
FOREVER!




Poem:
jeg føler en mangel på hjælp.. men kun 1 lytter
jeg føler en mangel på selvtillid.. men min krop nægter
jeg føler en mangel på mod.. men min sind svigter
jeg føler en mangel på styrke.. men ingen bakker op
jeg føler en mangel på viljen.. men livet nægter
jeg føler en mangel på migselv.. men jeg kan ikke se
jeg føler en mangel på alt.. når det hele svigter

(danish. here translation)
I feel a missing part of help.. but only 1 is listning
I feel a missing part of selfconfidence.. but my body refuses
I feel a missing part of courage.. but my mind fails
I feel a missing part of strength.. but no one is helping me up
I feel a missing part of will.. but life refuses
I feel a missing part of me.. but i can't see
I feel a missing part of everything.. when it all fails.

My heart is bleeding
My Eyes are sleeping
My Body is breathing
My mind is empty
My soul is forgotten
My life is nothing




Critz and comments are allowed.

 

[VivaLaPineapple]

if u could produce lyrics that didnt involve the swearing i might have given u credit but to me those are just a filler. in lyrics such as those the just take up space it give people credit when they can actually think up a way display the emotion without the use of shortcut words.

 

[Xsis]

Just wrote this..
don't know where it came from.. just.. outta my head.. and BAM. down on the computer.. lol


Everybody here is forgotten
you lay at the bottom
you can't do nothing
but you know theres something

Digging a hole so deep
into my heart so i can bleed
tears falling from the sky
while you watch me die

time to time i start to hurt
looking into my past in durt
everything is falling away
all this turmoil you've given me

now i'm hated everywhere
my body lays here
shedding a tear
listen and hear

time to time i start to hurt
looking into my past in durt
everything is falling away
all this turmoil you've given me






but yeah.. your actually right

 

[Deverz]

Many spelling and grammical errors in both

Doesn't flow well in alot of parts

Some lines appear to be totally un-needed, But I guess it's your expession and you can write what ever you want

 

[Son Asid]

woaw... what a kick :S didn't know Danish people could write like that (no offense, i am a danish too) i think its good, really describe what u feal about the "*,*,*,*,*,*" :S sry to hear that u feel that way

Don't be a jackass, let the forum filter swear words or face the ban saber.
Cucumba
Forum Administrator.

 

[Xsis]

ey that sounds nice well.. english isn't properlly my best. and many grammatical.. well if you read some of marilyn mansons lyrics. there you see the same so Deverz i just write it in a way so i't can rhym of the lines.. well.. they just had to be there to express it better

 

[GhostfaceKillah]

wow cut down on the swearing dude

 

[Scorcher2k]

You really don't need to swear to get your point across. The fact that your not that good with english gives you all the more reason to look for words with more meaning than these 4 letter swear words. You really don't have to rhyme as well. Also, try not to focus on an event such as breaking up with your g/f because it pulls your head into the gutter and you end up getting pissed off instead of thinking about what to write.

 

[Xsis]

well sometimes.. your right.. my head explode with rage and hate.. can't control myself sometimes.. but well.. i think that this lyrics fits to Slipknot or something like that.. maybe i got my inpiration from them