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These are poems (don't freak, just read them) that I wrote a few minutes ago. I thought that you'd like to hear them.
I Love You All
I first came here, so lost and a noob.
I met some friends, some good ones too,
And then I met "The Rest of You".
I know I was mean, flame and spam,
But I can't help it; it's who I am.
I'm just another girl; a faulty human (like you)
Though to your eyes I stood proud and tall,
But to myself and God, I was still very small.
And despite your critique, I love you all
I wrote a dumb poem to show you this,
And I finish it with heart, and my angel's kiss.
If you're mad at me, and can't forgive.
Then I'm sorry, but it's not for you that I live.
True Friend
Do you care?
Do you know me?
Would you bare
My burden for me?
Would you listen
When I whined?
Would you defend
Me, if there was ever a time?
Of course;
You're my true friend,
And you'll be there,
Until the bitter end.
Dagli Occhi di Dio
Here it comes, it's time again.
I'm so happy, I could dance.
It's time to love, cry, and sing.
Come all, this is your last chance.
A friend you need, and family too,
But never forget that I first loved you.
I gave you your life and mine,
Now come with me, and bring your kids too.
You'll never cry in sorrow,
You'll never feel pain.
Just open your heart,
And say my name.
I hope that you will
Accept me today.
The offer's almost up,
So sing out "Yahweh".
Good, now follow me
We'll fly together.
I love you, my child,
Now let's live forever.
~~~~~~~~
That's all. Any crits?
*thanks in advance, because I have to go eat something*
I Love You All
I first came here, so lost and a noob.
I met some friends, some good ones too,
And then I met "The Rest of You".
I know I was mean, flame and spam,
But I can't help it; it's who I am.
I'm just another girl; a faulty human (like you)
Though to your eyes I stood proud and tall,
But to myself and God, I was still very small.
And despite your critique, I love you all
I wrote a dumb poem to show you this,
And I finish it with heart, and my angel's kiss.
If you're mad at me, and can't forgive.
Then I'm sorry, but it's not for you that I live.
True Friend
Do you care?
Do you know me?
Would you bare
My burden for me?
Would you listen
When I whined?
Would you defend
Me, if there was ever a time?
Of course;
You're my true friend,
And you'll be there,
Until the bitter end.
Dagli Occhi di Dio
Here it comes, it's time again.
I'm so happy, I could dance.
It's time to love, cry, and sing.
Come all, this is your last chance.
A friend you need, and family too,
But never forget that I first loved you.
I gave you your life and mine,
Now come with me, and bring your kids too.
You'll never cry in sorrow,
You'll never feel pain.
Just open your heart,
And say my name.
I hope that you will
Accept me today.
The offer's almost up,
So sing out "Yahweh".
Good, now follow me
We'll fly together.
I love you, my child,
Now let's live forever.
~~~~~~~~
That's all. Any crits?
*thanks in advance, because I have to go eat something*