ok, maybe ill get flamed up for posting sum real critz here but i will say my opinion thoug
:
first, nice job but the following points need work:
1. head looks (way) too wide from the front view
2. from the back view the neck looks too cylindrish, correct plz (cause youll see him form the back the whole ingame time
)
3. maybe its just me but the hip looks too thin and also does the arm-to-shoulder-connection
4. eyes are much too far at the back of the head in the side view
5. the funny "antenna" on his head is toooooo thin (at the end with the ball)
6. the brest is a bit too far down.
thats all for now, ill wait for the pants to crit further. fix up the things i mentioned an it'll look much better than it looks now already
hop this helps
-Goku SSJ-
EDIT: did a short drawover to help ya a bit:
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