Just Until Sundown

[TimTheEnchantor]

I'll wait for you,
To make your apologies,
But just until sundown,
You can make them.

I will not wait forever,
All the ones I wanted to be,
Will never come true,
Your the only one I want to hold,
Make me feel warm in this cold.

Just until sundown,
You can make your apologies and repremend our friendship,
Remember the music playing and shining it on you,
For I will always forgive you for the bloody lip.
Just until sundown.



You've lost your chance.

Poem by: Me
Photograph by: Me
Time of day: 7:54 pm
Where: West Coast of Florida, Cape Coral Yacht Club.

 

[Judge]

very nice panorama pic, why dont we ever have a sky like that in holland :/

anyway looks good, took the shot at a right time.

 

[phrack50]

Very pretty pic. Nice poem too

 

[Marauder]

beautifull sky picture...
im not in favore of the poem though...the lyrics dont touch me to much

 

[dudeman]

its a bit dark, could be a bit brighter.. other than that its good, very good.

 

[DarkaGe|SSJ]

supposed to be dark its 7:45pm , poem unless it has raps i dun really like em but the picture makes me wanna be der, 10/10 poem = dunno