just take a look :o

[Marauder]

well, no name...
anyways....saw this amazing drawing on the internet, so i tried to draw it freehand...(thats why it looks abit messed up..)
i wanna buy one of those pens that u can use on the pc, that will be cool..
anyways...
first time trying to color,didnt use any tutorials....just a WIP...kinda lazy so i didnt do the hair yet....

i would like to hear more comments about the coloring...to know how to fix it and make it better
dont wanna use tutorials....dont ask why

 

[Naz]

hmm looks good, also for a first time.

Some things look a bit wrong though.. allthough I'm not quite sure til I've sene the original pic. His skin has a 2d look much like you see in anime. His hair has depth though, looks a bit like two different styles mixed together.

You should finish it first , it might work out if everything is colored, good luck buddy

 

[Korb]

Im taking a guess the hair is going to be black? nose looks awkward and the left eyebrow looks kinda BIG, but otherwise its good and the color is real good

 

[Marauder]

yeah the hair is gonna be blue'ish black, like my ****ty sideburn
thanks for commenting guys

 

[MinesSkylineR34]

as i told you before, those sideburns suck

 

[Wangster]

looks nice, but sloppy, the sideburns look verry unrealistic dough :O gj.

 

[Marauder]

sideburns suck, yeah...errmmmm was very lazy on em..lol
and its sloppy cause its freehand :S

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

Except for the sideburns the rest of the pic looks good man. I'm want to see the completed version before giving any serious critz