So what you guys think
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I know it's simple but i just dont like the ones where there are filteres everywhere
I commend you for seeking constructive criticism, it is a great way to reflect on what you have and what would help improve your piece, never stop asking for it.
This is not a bad signature by any means, but it is also not perfect (nothing ever is,) and there are a few things that you could improve upon. As you stated, the signature is simple, but that is not a
bad thing. I believe in simplicity, it is often the best approach to design and it is how I approach my own work more often than not.
But, it is now time to get down and into the nitty-gritty, so to speak. Your signature is visually unbalanced because of your design choices. The positioning of your image (centered) creates a lot of visual weight, this is especially true since your image is surrounded by negative space. The visual weight being created by your image is not bad, but, it is competing with your typography. Your typography also creates a lot of visual weight, not because of it's size, but because of the contrast it has with the white background. The two (image and typography) being so close together and being so heavy, create an uneasy and unbalanced piece. If you were to adjust the size and positioning of your typography, you would immediately change the balance of the piece. If it is your goal to keep the signature as is, with only minor tweaks, then I would highly recommend you work on the typography. Your signature would still be very simplistic (again not a bad thing) but it would be vastly improved.
However, if you are looking to break the simplicity of the signature, then you could add a few more touches here and there, some of which have already been mentioned. Brushes, color, filters (don't have to be overused) and effective typography can really enhance your signature. You can still create a simplistic piece by using all that I just listed, it depends on how you use them, when and where you use them, and how creative you are. Keep practicing, keep having fun (or try to) and don't over think things, work with what you know and then keep challenging yourself to learn more!
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