Jessica Alba

[likuedsnake]

hey guys, i haven't post any art in a while. here's my latest one. another charcoal. it's jessica alba from Sin City. here's my reference: http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l179/likuedsnake_MGS/jessicaalba.jpg

and here it is. i'll show more progress tomorrow. sleepy time

 

[PiXel]

god damn, this looks tight, good job!

 

[-Origin]

It's hard to tell from this angle and distance, but I think the eyes should be a little bit higher.. I'm not sure.

 

[likuedsnake]

"/ i try to be as accurate as possible, but i can't seem to see what's wrong with it. anyways, update!

 

[.Guzzie.]

, looks really artistic. Job well done, lets see more.

-GuZzie

 

[likuedsnake]

rgr. i'm just finishing up some stuff. i'll put it up soon.

 

[likuedsnake]

here it is ... the long awaited update. i am so beat. sleepy time.

 

[Growler]

Her left eyelid is too low

 

[.Guzzie.]

Wow, Major inprovment, loooking hot and sexyy , But hahah, what's with her left eye. LOL.

But she looooksss SXCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC

-GuZzie

 

[veqeta]

yeah she looks kinda stoned 0.o

 

[MF29]

Her face is the only thing that bothers me.

 

[-Origin]

That's what I said, but he saw nothing wrong with it... oh well.

 

[likuedsnake]

could you guys show me? i'll try to fix it when i have time because this is due on the day of finals, so i'm trying to finish it really fast. sorry if it's ugly X___X

 

[-Origin]

Here you go.

 

[Tales]

likuedsnake i think these pieces are good. overal nice renderings... but maybe sometimes you should try to draw something without a gride. im not trying to sound rude or im not even tryin to put you down but im just suggesting it because as great as the gride method is it takes a lot longer and it doesnt help you eyeball things as well.

as for the face i think the features are too clamped together. you made her eyes too big the face wider and less geometric/like a square. as you can see in the picture, jessia alba's left side of her face has an obvious plane change and the right side is darker.. moreover her face should be longer/more narrow.. but overall it's a really nice job..! keep it up and show us the finished version

good luck

 

[likuedsnake]

"/ i'll fix it when i have time, but in the mean time, i'm going to try to finish everything else up. well, about the grid system, i have no choice because my teacher told me to use it, sigh ... atleast my superman turned out fine. thanks for the comments

 

[likuedsnake]

update, sorry guys. no fix on the face. i'm really running out of time. :[

 

[Mirai_no_Trunks]

meh i dunno , i don't saw the original render you were guided , but the belly area it's too bright imo.

 

[-Origin]

His reference pic is in his first post... and all over Google. o_o

 

[likuedsnake]

weeeeeeeeee, i'm done. still no fix on the face. i'm really tired of this project. X___X i guess the title should be called, "Jessica Alba lookalike" or "Jessica Alba attempt" hehe. i hope you guys still like it.